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1the beach Empty the beach Mon Oct 27, 2008 2:50 pm

edwardcullenandjacobblack

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this si a skelton poem or somthing like that.

The beach
Brigth coloured beach balls fly in all direstions.
The waved crashing loudly on the shore,
the air is fresh but satly
the salty water makes you choke
the sand is soft but stractchy on bare skin

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2the beach Empty Re: the beach Tue Oct 28, 2008 5:11 am

Emotional_Esme

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W0W i loved it. btw, that type of poem is called a Haiku. Its a short japanese form of poetry that consists of one verse, using small syllables and words to describe somthing.

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3the beach Empty Re: the beach Tue Oct 28, 2008 2:54 pm

edwardcullenandjacobblack

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not a hiku hikus are three lines with 5 sylable 7 then 5 again

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4the beach Empty Re: the beach Wed Oct 29, 2008 3:38 pm

Emotional_Esme

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well, traditionally yes. But youre poem is a european adaption of the Haiku.

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5the beach Empty Re: the beach Wed Oct 29, 2008 11:25 pm

edwardcullenandjacobblack

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eh ohwell

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6the beach Empty Re: the beach Fri Oct 31, 2008 4:06 pm

Emotional_Esme

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lol

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7the beach Empty Re: the beach Tue Nov 04, 2008 2:10 pm

edwardcullenandjacobblack

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its still a poem

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8the beach Empty Re: the beach Thu Nov 06, 2008 8:54 am

Emotional_Esme

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yep it is Very Happy and its great!

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9the beach Empty Re: the beach Fri Nov 07, 2008 3:03 pm

edwardcullenandjacobblack

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aww thanks uhh backspaces XD

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10the beach Empty Re: the beach Tue Nov 11, 2008 3:05 pm

Emo

Emo

that was cool... i would write a poem but I am only well drawn when writing creative stories...

11the beach Empty Re: the beach Fri Nov 14, 2008 2:02 pm

edwardcullenandjacobblack

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thanks kim, lolz im good at poem and stories

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12the beach Empty Re: the beach Fri Nov 14, 2008 11:47 pm

Emo

Emo

lucky you XD

13the beach Empty Re: the beach Fri Dec 26, 2008 8:07 am

Emotional_Esme

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lol.

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