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1 the beach on Mon Oct 27, 2008 2:50 pm

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this si a skelton poem or somthing like that.

The beach
Brigth coloured beach balls fly in all direstions.
The waved crashing loudly on the shore,
the air is fresh but satly
the salty water makes you choke
the sand is soft but stractchy on bare skin


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2 Re: the beach on Tue Oct 28, 2008 5:11 am

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W0W i loved it. btw, that type of poem is called a Haiku. Its a short japanese form of poetry that consists of one verse, using small syllables and words to describe somthing.


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3 Re: the beach on Tue Oct 28, 2008 2:54 pm

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not a hiku hikus are three lines with 5 sylable 7 then 5 again


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4 Re: the beach on Wed Oct 29, 2008 3:38 pm

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well, traditionally yes. But youre poem is a european adaption of the Haiku.


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5 Re: the beach on Wed Oct 29, 2008 11:25 pm

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eh ohwell


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6 Re: the beach on Fri Oct 31, 2008 4:06 pm

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lol


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7 Re: the beach on Tue Nov 04, 2008 2:10 pm

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its still a poem


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8 Re: the beach on Thu Nov 06, 2008 8:54 am

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yep it is Very Happy and its great!


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9 Re: the beach on Fri Nov 07, 2008 3:03 pm

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aww thanks uhh backspaces XD


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10 Re: the beach on Tue Nov 11, 2008 3:05 pm

that was cool... i would write a poem but I am only well drawn when writing creative stories...


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11 Re: the beach on Fri Nov 14, 2008 2:02 pm

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thanks kim, lolz im good at poem and stories


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12 Re: the beach on Fri Nov 14, 2008 11:47 pm

lucky you XD


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13 Re: the beach on Fri Dec 26, 2008 8:07 am

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lol.


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